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Message par Marytchuy le Mar 31 Mai 2016 - 10:16

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It has began a long time ago, it was something strange to me, something new that i couldnt figure out firstly; but now i can say that this strong thing is powerful that i cannot control, that girl who drives me insane just by one glance or one smirk. Whenever we touch, she sends electrifying chills through my body. I've never believed that butterflies could dance in your stomach until i fell for her. But life wasn't that easier, i had to hide these feelings inside of my chest and admit that i will be always the third wheel since she has a boyfriend. That boyfriend whose name is Adam, it's true that he loves her but i've always had hope of her liking me just a little bit...


Maybe she was just attracted to him for his sweetness or something else, but when we share stares, her eyes say more than her mouth does. I feel a tension between us,something prohibited and wrong yet it feels so right.


I can really admit that i am head over heals for this girl, no one has such an effect on me, that's why i wasn't planing to give up on her easily, instead i'd fight to win her heart no matter what were the conditions or the consequences. I've never accepted to be the looser either it was in love or something else, and that won't change here, i don't want to regret letting her go without even trying things out with her.


One day, i decided that it was the day to end the pain and the waiting, i had to make the change, i had to gather the courage and confess to her, this was my last chance. I was yearning to tell her, to open up to her eventhough i wasn't sure of her feelings towards me. She was setting next to him in the cafeteria, giggling, i sighed and made my way to them, once i faced her she stopped giggling, i said hi and she replied with a shy smirk, i wasn't sure of how could i tell her, i switched my head to her boyfriend seeing the confusion in his eyes; he surely noticed the tension between her girlfriend and i, he was also afraid of loosing her. Then, i offered my hand and asked her to come with me to talk; she placed her hand on mine, which fit perfectly, her palm was sweaty, maybe because of her nervousness.


we walked in water closet beacuse that's the only place where we could have privacy. I became speechless in front of her and started to struggle while trying to make the words out. she was waiting impatiently.. i was rubbing the crook of my neck not knowing where to start then she held my hand and spoke: " don't be nervous just say what you have to say" ; i replied: "i... well... i.." she was staring at me right in the pupil of my eyes, i added: "i like you" and then i could'nt stare at her, i was afraid of her being disgusted or shocked, my eyes were glued on my shoes, then i felt a sweet fingers lifting my chin up, a shade of red spread all over my face and she was blushing too.. then she spoke: "was is that hard to say?" i was confused what she meant by that; i said: "what is that supposed to mean?"


she was blushing hard in that moment struggling to talk.. i placed my palm on her burning cheek encouraging her to pour out what she had. she finally talked: " well....hum.. i like you too.. but i couldn't tell you because i was afraid that it wouldn't be reciprocal.." my eyes widened at those words and i said : " it's been a decade when i fell for you, you cannot imagine how much you mean to me.." my eyes became watery and she wiped the tears away... and said : " no more pain now, i was waiting for you to make the first move.. i can't continue with Adam while i belong to you.." i squeezed her at those words tightly and said: "Now i don't have to share you with anyone else, you are all MINE."



Marytchuy note: well since i'm new here, i wanted to share one of my short stories, it kind of reflect what's happening to me currently... i hope you like it Smile Very Happy



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Re: Short story (MINE)

Message par lacrymosa le Mer 1 Juin 2016 - 0:46

hmm poor Adam lol
But i think this is a beatifull story Very Happy

Do you plan to make a second chapter ? Wink


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Message par Queen Of Nothing le Mer 1 Juin 2016 - 9:35

Ur story seems touching though i didn't expect the happy ending , anyway . keep the good work and if only we can read more stories .
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Message par Marytchuy le Mer 1 Juin 2016 - 10:12

Thanks girls a lot, glad you liked it Very Happy, maybe i'll update something from time to another Smile

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Message par Queen Of Nothing le Mer 1 Juin 2016 - 10:16

We're waiting ... Smile
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Message par Masssilia le Sam 11 Juin 2016 - 4:12

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Message par lost_mind le Sam 11 Juin 2016 - 6:10

a lovely story Wink
you're soo luckyy .....
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Message par blueber le Dim 31 Juil 2016 - 10:15

omg this is so cute , and i loved the way u described the feelings , girl we need more bravo
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Re: Short story (MINE)

Message par ChildOfTheRainbow le Lun 1 Aoû 2016 - 12:47

Such a good story, i got a little emotional while reading this and kinda reminded me of my own story... anyways, I'm really curious as to if this is a pure work of your imagination or is there some real life events hidden in there? either way this was beautiful, keep up the good work Smile
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Re: Short story (MINE)

Message par Marytchuy le Jeu 15 Sep 2016 - 7:22

Well actually, most of the work is from my imagination, but the feelings and the emotions are real.. I'll try to update something soon

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Message par Sophia_ben le Jeu 15 Sep 2016 - 7:42

God it felt so real it made my eyes tear up . Great story keep up the good work ^^
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